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really intriguing !!
i had some issues with the incorrect pronouns being used for ash (i selected he/him but it used she/her most of the time), and a few scenes playing a bit awkwardly where i'm unsure if my choice worked or if it was meant to play that way (after selecting to ask lex if everything's okay or letting brit do it, it jumps to when we're opening up the tents).
it was still an enjoyable read though and i'm looking forward to seeing where this goes, i love modern period piece ifs :]

gnawing at the bars of my enclosure !!!! chapter 6 was so good

i decided to replay from the start, instead of continuing the save i had, and boy am i glad i did bc i got to fall in love with all the characters again <3
especially vicente... i forgot how good their scenes were >~<
i'm convinced he was specifically designed to be the perfect ro for me because he has all of my favourite ro aspects.
excited to see what the future chapters hold for him and the mc :3

i adored this chapter and the ending had my heart pounding,, i can tell you love a cliffhanger and you're so good at writing them TT
part of me wishes i waited longer than 20 hours to read it but it just means i'll be more excited when the next one comes out,,,,, or i'll replay it and go for a different ro but the emo one has a Grip on me.

i hope your upcoming surgery and following recovery goes well !! i'm eager to see what happens next but i'm also happy to wait however long it takes to come out bc you always give us such amazing work :]

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i played up to chapter 2 when it first came out, but by the time i saw the update for chapter 3, you had announced that chapter 4 would need a fresh save so i held off on playing until it released. i don't regret waiting... but now i wish i'd waited even longer because i love your writing and this story and now i desperately want to read more :']

i had played viatica before you even announced cantata, and as soon as you did i knew i was going to love it, but man... playing through it again and getting to the new content has cemented its place as my favourite IF. your world-building is just amazing and i'm so in love with the story and its characters.
i fully realised the hold it has on me when it was building up to the end of ch3, and i could feel my heart beating in anticipation ><

i'll try to keep this vague so it's spoiler free, but the beginnings of ch4 and all the emotions were just so !!!!!! i love how you've done that storyline, the 2 vastly different experiences because of the same event and the different effects its had, agh </3
i won't say too much on the ending, but even though i had kind of been anticipating something similar happening, it Hurt;;

also, i adore vicente and i would do anything for them... i went into it intending to romance him because their kind of character archetype is what i usually go for, and i won't lie and say bayram and secret ro didn't make me reconsider, but seeing more of him and his interactions with the mc... i'm definitely going to be choosing him. i love their dynamic so much and i can't wait to see their relationship grow;;

sorry for the long rambley comment, i am just so incredibly invested and i eagerly await chapter 5 and any and all future updates. i hope you enjoy the process of creating them and that inspiration comes to you easily :] <3

i'm obsessed... i love your writing style and the selected music/audio works so well with setting the mood. i'm so intrigued by the story and so excited to see where this if goes :]
(also the therapist being one of the romance options? love. can't wait to see where that route will take me \o/)

how exciting !! when i found 'type help' i was immediately invested and played the whole game in one sitting. it made me realise how scary and unnerving solely text-based games can be, but i can't wait to see what else you're able to accomplish in this new format :]