really intriguing !!
i had some issues with the incorrect pronouns being used for ash (i selected he/him but it used she/her most of the time), and a few scenes playing a bit awkwardly where i'm unsure if my choice worked or if it was meant to play that way (after selecting to ask lex if everything's okay or letting brit do it, it jumps to when we're opening up the tents).
it was still an enjoyable read though and i'm looking forward to seeing where this goes, i love modern period piece ifs :]