I am a slut for Cae's massive... logistical talents. There's some excellent fantasy army-marching in between all the sex scenes.
I also like that she is massively, massively repressed at the start of the story, so you get some proper will-they-won't-they before she finally admits that she wants to fuck the hot demons.
You might have done it as a joke, but this is good solid action harem comedy. Like, Ember is 100 Girlfriends-level at understanding his girlfriends' needs and meeting them where they're at. It's just that "where they're at" is an unusually wide range of gender and sexual preferences.
And like, the whole book hits this great balance of over the top and zany but still taking itself seriously. Like, there's a bit where the Fae steal the main character's pronouns and he has to find a way to buy them back, and somehow it turns into a cool and affirming scene for his enby wife. I don't know how you do it.
It's Sarah Kerrigan vs the UEF. That's it. That's the novel.
Well, okay, it's half the novel - the other half is hot sex scenes with a girl who can rewrite people's biology to turn them into hot aliens (and trans their gender if they want), and there's a layer of cyberpunk hypercapitalist theming to round it out and establish that the bad guys deserve to have Sarah zerg-rush all over them. But I really can't exaggerate how much it's borrowing from Starcraft and Supreme Commander.
(There's even a throwaway gag where Sarah not-Kerrigan is deciding what to call her new ranged combat unit. She tries to call it a "hydralisk," but changes her mind when she finds out it's copyrighted.)
That being said, the writing is pretty solid. It does a good job of depicting an RTS-style army in a way that sounds cool instead of contrived or game-y. And DragonCobolt continues to be good at writing hot sex scenes. So like, I'm not saying it's a bad thing to do a porn parody of famous RTS games, I'm just saying that it's very upfront about what it's doing.
