very good game with one of the best NTS sex scene, congrats
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It's very good. Catherine's nts is very well made. Paths makes sense and the pacing is quick enough.-- edited--- . I like the fact there's no repetitions with the pictures. Reactions of Catherine's, with suppressed chat creates drama and tension. WELL DONE. I'll hope you continue the Catherine arc. Mixing their regrets, needs, tension lost of controls, and bad choices (make it with friend par exemple). Consequences are present in the game, and it adds a lot. I like they struggle a lot while NTS, testing things, willing both to have their own satisfaction without admiting they do selfishthings. In my opinion that's here than your story brights the most. When they try to stay in controlled nts whereas there is so much jerks that bring ntr.
After a quickstart with a lot ( A LOT) of zooms on your girlfriend's ass. Without any sense of transition nor momentum, you reach the apex of the absence of narrative structure : a black man surfing with an erection. That's killed me. If you want send me money for my tomb, I have no paypal, anyway my soul was crushed by this experience.
Author, when you have no NTR' experiences in your life, it's ok, and wealthy I mean, but don't try to mimic, it simply doesn't work.