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Here are some problems with your game and things i should be added:

Mistakes:

-You can infinite jump in the house

-You can interact with the house door while transitioning

-The hint text doesn't update if you do things faster than the dialogue finishes

Should be better with:

-We should be able to see a display of line at where we are shooting

-Zooming shouldn't be necessary to kill the crows since it's confusing 

-The crows that were killed should have some kind of mark on them so it's easier to find them

Things i like about this game:

-The movement isn't too slow or isn't too fast either and again it doesn't waste time like some other games do by making the player slow as hell

-You can properly jump.

thank you for the consideration <3

This game is a fun concept but it's not that scary and there is some things i don't like about it that i find time wasting

when you press escape it takes you back to the main menu and all your progress is lost

jumping down from the hole at the -9th floor takes you back to the start which i think is pretty time wasting 

when you move diagonally you get faster which i don't complain about but is still a game development mistake

you can see the undermap while looking down beetween the gap around the floor -28

and going up doesn't have secret jumpscare :(

The ending is really bad and pointless

4/10

Pretty fun for a simple and short game like this, great job john

my favorite part was papyrus

thanks