Here are some problems with your game and things i should be added:
Mistakes:
-You can infinite jump in the house
-You can interact with the house door while transitioning
-The hint text doesn't update if you do things faster than the dialogue finishes
Should be better with:
-We should be able to see a display of line at where we are shooting
-Zooming shouldn't be necessary to kill the crows since it's confusing
-The crows that were killed should have some kind of mark on them so it's easier to find them
Things i like about this game:
-The movement isn't too slow or isn't too fast either and again it doesn't waste time like some other games do by making the player slow as hell
-You can properly jump.