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Thank you for this detailed critique. Honestly, I appreciate you taking the time to analyze the timeline and logic this deeply most people don't look past the surface.

To address your points:

1. Grammar & Writing: You are correct, English is not my first language. I am working on improving this, and I plan to do a little 'polishing' on the early chapters once the main story is further along.
2. The Legal/Prison Realism: I admit I took significant 'creative liberties' here to set up the Revenge plot quickly. I realize a life sentence for 'toxic behavior' is unrealistic in the real US legal system; the implication was meant to be much heavier false charges, but I clearly didn't convey that well enough in the text. I’ll look at refining that backstory.
3. Noelle & The 5-Year Gap: You raised a great point about their relationship feeling too distant for partners. Without spoiling too much, Noelle keeps things professional intentionally for reasons revealed later, but I agree that after 5 years, their dynamic should feel closer. I will keep this in mind for their upcoming scenes.
4. Choices: The early game is very linear to set the stage, but the next update (v0.2.4) specifically introduces branching paths. You will stop being 'forced' into interactions you don't want, and your choices will matter more.

The game is still in early development, and pacing is something I am actively learning. Thanks for giving it a shot despite the rough edges.

@djkunn @YogSothoth1982

I’ve read both of your comments carefully. I realize you are both coming from the same place: you are worried about 'surprise NTR' and you want the MC to have dignity.

I want to address you both together to clear up two massive misunderstandings about the current plot:

1. The 'Marriage' (Emma): You are mistaken—she did not marry the villain. I haven't revealed her full situation yet, but I can confirm right now, they are not married. The Villain has not 'won' her in the way you think. Her situation is unknown, not a lost cause.
   
2. The 'Spy' (Lana): You view sending her as a 'tribute' or 'sharing.' It is not. She is a time bomb. The MC isn't giving her away, he is planting a weapon inside the enemy's base to destroy the man who ruined his life. It is a calculated attack, not an act of submission.

Let me tell you this, not as a developer, but as a man to another man: I hate NTR just as much as you do. I would never write a game where the MC is cucked or humiliated for the player's enjoyment.

I cannot spoil the upcoming twists here on the public page, but if you want to discuss this in detail and get real reassurance, please join our Discord. We can talk openly there.

The game is still in its early phase. Please have a little patience and let the revenge plot cook. If you still feel it’s not for you after the next update, I understand—but don't abandon it now based on a misunderstanding.

To answer your main question: No. None of the LIs or girls the MC sleeps with are touched, used, or 'fucked' by anyone else.

1. Charles's Dialogue: He is the villain. He is supposed to be hateable. Just because he says he’s going to use someone to antagonize the MC doesn't mean the story lets him do it. There is a difference between a villain's threats and actual NTR content.
2. The Girl MC was in love with: Her current situation has not been explained or shown yet. You are assuming the worst based on the setup, but the reality of her circumstances hasn't been revealed. Please wait for the story to progress further, and the truth will become clear.

I’ll be posting a detailed devlog soon to clear up where the story is going, but you don't need to worry about surprise NTR here.

I want to be 100% clear: There is no NTR or Sharing in this game.

1. Blackmail: This is a conflict for the MC to overcome, not a fetish or a final outcome.
2. The 'Sent' Character: This is a strategic plot point, not 'sharing.' Context matters.
3. LIs: The villain may seem ahead now, but not all of the MC's Love Interests have been introduced yet.

I will be posting a devlog soon to address these concerns and discuss the next update. Please wait for that before jumping to conclusions.

Thanks for the interest! I don't have an official Chinese translation planned just yet.
However, I could look into releasing a machine translated version (using AI tools) in the next update. It wouldn't be perfect, but it would make the game playable.Let me know your thoughts.

Thank you so much for the incredibly generous offer. I would love to make the game available to Spanish players.

I will send you a friend request on Discord shortly (my username is genda0106) so we can chat about how the translation files work. Thanks again!

Right now, we're aiming for a December–January release window. We’ll also be sharing progress reports along the way so you can see how things are shaping up. That said, things may shift depending on how development goes, but we’ll keep you updated.

Don’t worry, NTR/sharing isn’t on our wishlist either. We’re here for revenge and dark theme — not relationship nightmares.

I totally understand where you're coming from, and I appreciate your honesty.

The only reason we mentioned that some kinks aren't confirmed yet is because we genuinely want all kinds of players to give this game a try. The core storyline we're building doesn't really allow for too many extreme or varied fetishes—if we forced them in, it would break the tone, pacing, and realism of the story, making it less immersive and even unplayable for many.

That said, we've received feedback after the recent release, especially about plot holes, and we're taking that seriously. Our main focus for the next update is to fix those issues and return to a clearer, more grounded revenge-driven narrative. We do want to add branching paths to explore different choices and preferences, but as we've mentioned before, we're still students learning as we go.

On top of that, two team members recently left the project, so progress has been a bit slower. But we’re committed to continuing this project — all we ask is for a little patience and support while we get things right.

We are fully committed to this project and giving it our 100% to make it the best it can be. It’s still too early to say anything for sure, which is why your feedback is invaluable in shaping its future.

We might add Harem, but we’ll announce it as the story progresses. Join our Discord to stay updated

Hey there! Thanks for your interest in our game! Right now, we're focusing on our main storyline. As for specific content/tags, we’ll be adding more details as development progresses, but we aim to provide a balance that fits the narrative while keeping player agency in mind.

Regarding kinks/fetishes, we haven't decided anything yet but we'll make sure to clarify this as we move forward.

Stay tuned for updates, and we appreciate your support!