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This is my honest review of Dorian pink. First of all, the art is extremely good. The focus on small detail in layout, light and particles make the atmosphere alive. I think you can still improve in the sound effect area of the game, the sound is there but it was subtle and doesn't hit for me. The background music however is impressive, it really sales the mood of the sassiness theme in the game. The Npc gave me a little bit of the undertale vibe and somehow the doughnut mini is making me hungry. There are some technical problems that I've found while playing this game. The game crashes a lot for me...I don't know why but maybe it was because of my slow potato laptop. The singing mini-game also needs a little tweak on the speed control. if I hold the space button too long, it became hard to control and I missed some of the notes as the result. It took me around 2 hours to complete the game and I got the safe route for it, Overall, very solid game, with a heavy focus on art and such a lovely game.

for your first game, this is good, You should be proud that you've finished making a game!

And yes there's also some part that can still be improve, like game design, music and game feel. This 3 part will make your game better fast.

Anyway that's just my opinion, have a nice day

I'm glad to be a little helpful, keep up the good work👍

Hi, thank you for making window version. I like how simple yet fun this game can be, and I love the pixel art too!

But there are something that still can be improved in this game:

- the pochita-cursor is cute, but it doesn't really aim where I want to click, and it also became invisible when I go back to the menu page after dying.

- killing zombie can be improve, well this is just my opinion, you can ignore it if you want, but for me, it feels a it lacking something, and some of the improvement that I can think was to add some sort of damage popup, more blood spray/gore, or screen shake.

- variety of zombie, maybe the zombie can come in wave form if you know what I mean, and maybe after reaching certain wave, a boss zombie will spawn and after killing it, you can choose an upgrade, then even stronger enemies will come!

So in summary, I can see the effort you guys put in this game and I like it. I hope you guys the best, the only thing that I think that are lacking in this game is the sense of progression.

well then it's okay, take your time<(￣︶￣)>

Will this game have a window version for it? I want to play it but I always have problems to run html game on my browser.

Wow, thank you so much for your explanation!

Yes, I use Godot to make games, and I still have a lot to learn. I kind of get your explanation, though I still can't wrap my head around coding. Thank you for providing the source code; I'll use it to study more.👍

Hey, sorry for the very late reply and thank you so much for listening to my selfish request.

About your game, I can see that you put a lot of care into it! Like the little smiley face the cat make when it eat a donut and the font you use with the cat paw,it's cute! The art are simple yet blend very well together with the UI. The music is good too, did you make all of this by yourself? hehe

I read your profile too, and if this is your first game that you make, congratulations for finishing it and I hope you enjoy making more games!

I'm trying to play it on mobile phone but it won't run, do you have windows version that I can play?

Sorry for asking you this but I really want to play it•́  ‿ ,•̀

Thank you for playing! 

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Thank you for playing my games, glad that you enjoy it!

I tried to make this game difficult because of the simple gameplay loop,  but maybe I made it too difficult

Beat the boss with 1 hp left•́  ‿ ,•̀

I actually like the art, it suits the rabbit well,and the background is amazing too. for the gameplay, i would say add a little bit more juice to it, right now it feels a little bit static...but overall, it was a nice game! 

Thank you for telling me, now the game is playable

This is just my opinion to make this game better, so don't take this to heart. For me, this game would be interesting if it was just faster, to make it more challenging, and also add some game juice to it if you can, like screen shake or some smoke particle from the player.

And you also need to add objective ( example: survive for 2 min, or collect 10 coins) for the player to advance to the next level.

Btw, Nice music you got there(◡ ω ◡)

This game...somehow made ground pound really fun.Nice.

Solid level, beautiful art and so much game juice! Love it! But it would be nice if you could add levels so that I can see how far did I progress, and..maybe revisit the old level to ground pound even more.(◡ ω ◡).

How do you add screen transition though? I only know fade in and fade out.

I like it, a lot.

Perfect sound effects, Background music, art, hell even the execution on the theme one button is perfect. Just a little bit of screen shake, and it would make it really feels like an asteroid hit the earth.(◍•ᴗ•◍)

Thank you for your feedback, it really means a lot to me, this game was originally a puzzle game but I think it would be fun to mix it up. Thank you for playing it!

Thank you for your feedback, It really means a lot to me:D. Yeah, I think it'll better if I add a skip button to it.

I like your design and the decoration, but the big space make the level look empty. And I think it would be cool if you can kill the guard or something like that. It was a nice game:)

Loved the art man, I only wish the game have more levels, its fun and I don't mind playing it a little longer:D

Why is there's so much talented people out there :") amazing art and smooth scene transitions, I played it till the end and not gonna like, I like it. I just wish the game have sounds to it, it will bring the game up alive even more, plus, I stayed till the end, hope to see more text:) it was a good game, nice job!

Simple, straight forward game, but this game have a really bad collision not gonna lie, I cannot take some of the diamond because of the spike collision, and sometimes I stuck into a wall. The player and the statue sprite is cool, but the tiles art doesn't really match for me, the level is too big and it looks empty, nice music,btw.I'm sorry if It sound harsh but it was for the better, I want you to improve:D. I can see your passion when making this game, the fact that you've finish making this game up is enough to be prove. Don't give up okay, you'll get better, trust me:D

I'm really glad you like it, thank you for playing!

thank you for your feedback, it really help. When I make the game I just assume that people will try to use the mouse, but turns out I was wrong, thanks again:D

It was simple game and I really enjoy the puzzle, I played till the end and I've found some minor bugs that make you control the doll even after you go out from it, but it doesn't effect the game so much, it was a good game. Nice job!

I really like your pixel art, is was so cute! I founded a bug where if you keep on hurting in the green fire, you will never die. But other than that, everything is good.

My screen is too small:') but I do get to play it somehow. Anyway, it was good, I felt like playing a mini game. Keep it up:D

Nice little short game, I only hope that there are at least some sound into it:)

I can't use the meat in the game:'). Anyway, I enjoy playing it! Keep it up.

its a good game with a little twist at the end :D

I like the story of it. It was interesting, but I do hope this game have some sound into it.

Nice little game :)

thank you for playing!

Thank you for your feedback:D

Well, apparently the bug appear in my run because I spam the Z button on the dialog, after I stop doing that the game just run smoothly:D

Great game! I feel like it blend perfectly with the old type of game.

I love how beautiful this game is, short and simple, but very well made game :)

This one is also an amazing game. Beautiful art and music, polished and enjoyable gameplay. But I do hope that this game have more npc that can teach you on how to craft. Anyway, this is a well made game!

Amazing tittle Ui not gonna lie, it tell you everything that needed to be done in the game right away. I love the sound effect and the art too! It really do feel like mario/metal slug game, very polish game and I really recommend people to play it.