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Not so spoil anything too major but when her opinion of MC does change it doesn't come about via a shallow idea of "well he's hot now" even if she does find him attractive. If that's all that changed her mind then yeah, that's just terrible writing and I wouldn't expect anyone to sympathize with her or like her if that's all that changed with her. I think a good comparison for Tiffany would be a character like Catherine from cosy cafe (if you've ever played it). Someone whose meanness comes from their circumstances and is more surface level than perhaps a genuine reflection of who they are, who only needs to be given a chance to be better and then they will be better

Yeah I get that but for Tiffany there will be a deepdive into her character and why she is the way she is coupled with a redemption of sorts. Hopefully that assuages some of your worries surrounding her. Shes a three dimensional character and disliking her is what you're supposed to do right now but the hope is, you and others will warm up to her as the story develops:)

She's very unlikable right now (by design) but her character will go through changes and her multiple dimensions beyond bitchy hot girl will become clear. Hopefully people will warm up to her when that happens!

Thank you! And yes, I can't believe the typos made it in but thankfully I should have them all fixed when Chapter 3 is released

I'm hoping development on average for each chapter will be around 4 - 5 months (rendering images takes a long time) however this can change depending upon the length of each chapter, some may take longer or shorter than others. Chapter 3 right now is about a third of the way finished in terms of rendering!

Thank you so much for the very kind words, that's definitely put me in higher spirits moving forward! As to typos etc I'll make sure to catch those for Chapter 3 and every other subsequent chapter, thank you for letting me know!

I see. I'll add that to the description of the game but don't worry, there will be no incest or NTR in this game. It's a harem game and as such will feature multiple love interests concurrently but nothing too extreme such as the genres you just mentioned. It doesn't fit with this story or any story I plan on creating

The tags should already be there unless you're referring to something I am not seeing?

Regarding the downloads I'd appreciate any suggestions beyond mediafire. I was looking at mega but the issue there is that once this game grows beyond I believe a 5gb limit (which it will after a few updates) mega becomes a pain for those who do not have a premium account. (I have contacted itch for larger file size for direct download just waiting on a reply)

Thank you for the feedback and glad you enjoyed the experience thus far!

Completely agree about the dialogue, at times it can be somewhat bland or clunky in some places (Chapter one I think suffers the most) but it's something I'm improving the more I write. 

As to the description to it being linear, I shall add that now. Thank you for the suggestion:)