I liked the weird codex stuff. I always like when an author creates a world incomplete in glimpses and half thoughts that give a lot of credit to the people in that world as not explaining it for my benefit but simply living it as they know it, however that is and however I interpret that. I think you successfully make a weird little tale in this.
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Thanks for the comment. I really enjoyed the weird nostalgia thing, the lord of the flies 14 year olds and the 30 year old voice. I liked the self aware writing. It has a cool flippant flavour to it that I'd like to have. Genuinely laughed and enjoyed your story. Well done.