Interesting, mysterious story. I included it in part 4 of my WAG Challenge compilation video series, if you would like to take a look :) https://youtu.be/rpGZajhytQ4

Thanks for the comment. I really enjoyed the weird nostalgia thing, the lord of the flies 14 year olds and the 30 year old voice. I liked the self aware writing. It has a cool flippant flavour to it that I'd like to have. Genuinely laughed and enjoyed your story. Well done.

You can also play it on the web: http://writer.inklestudios.com/stories/d28m