Also, Kieran is not just some ordinary assistant, right? He absolutely cannot be as simple as he appears. I feel like he must be connected to that group of animals that prey on other animals. And that ancient wooden carving might not represent the protagonist at all, but Dragan instead. It feels almost like some kind of Cthulhu-like totem, something that could awaken the evil force sleeping inside the protagonist.
Please save him, Kieran. You’re the only one who can truly help him.
Everyone keeps accusing the protagonist of being selfish, but no one actually knows what he went through. Just like the first time he saw that black panther, no freshman would have gone there looking for trouble. He only wanted to get an eye exam, and instead he got dragged into a whole series of things he knew nothing about. That is not fair.
It makes me angry, and honestly, deeply hurt. What gives them the right to treat me like that? I was already trying to process the pain and trauma I had gone through that same year. I was trying to adapt to a completely new environment, and yet they so easily shattered every bit of balance I had managed to build.
I am not selfish enough to ask the whole world to understand me, but could the whole world at least stop provoking me?
The lion says that everyone came to take care of me, but that I rejected them all. He is a hypocrite. Did anyone actually offer real, practical help? No. It was just empty words. Worse than that, they did this to someone who was already mentally and emotionally so fragile. Put any normal person in that situation, and none of them would have been able to endure it.
Even though it’s really hard for me to accept, the story itself is honestly amazing. Please don’t change your original outline and structure just because of some readers’ opinions. It’s really great — it has enough ups and downs and plot twists, and I love it so much.
But PLZ, please add a bit more of the protagonist actually taking the lead, whether he’s the bottom or the top, PLZ!
Your reply wasn’t rude — he was insulting your work. If it were me, I’d be even angrier.
But honestly, I’m also really struggling with this direction, because right now I can’t see any hope of a good ending. It’s kind of unimaginable for me… I’m someone who gets very emotionally invested, and at this point I’m just drowning in pain…
I was even planning how to add the shark, Ronaway, and the polar bear into my harem, but in reality there isn’t a single person in my harem. That really hurts.
Still, I think he’s the one who was impolite — your tone was justified, because he was making insulting comments about your work. If he doesn’t like it, he could just walk away, but attacking your work like that is not okay. I believe you definitely have a complete internal logic and an unexpected ending planned (even though I’m still really suffering right now QAQ).
What really makes this so painful for me is that the protagonist is written way too mediocre — so ordinary that there’s nothing outstanding about him at all, and he’s even overly kind… I can’t even see any chance of a good ending later on. It honestly hurts so much, especially for someone like me who gets immersed so easily. He clearly has such powerful abilities, but doesn’t know how to use them and has no say in anything. For all I know, that so-called divine artifact might even be tricking him… Please, give me a dark route where he turns evil and takes over the world, PLZ.
This is so painful— the story is amazing, but it hurts too much! Thank goodness I left a romance behind in Berno, or I’d really end up all alone, sob sob…
Plz, give me an ending where I’m in control and ruling the world. I promise I’ll train these two bad dogs into good doggies. (When I was literally leading the two of them around on leashes in the bar, I was so excited.)
