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As someone who gets way too emotionally invested, I strongly oppose any kind of romantic relationship between those two dogs!No！！！！！！！！

Will this turn into one of those “regretful husband desperately chasing his wife” arcs? Ahhh, I really love those two dogs, even though they betrayed me.

Even though it’s really hard for me to accept, the story itself is honestly amazing. Please don’t change your original outline and structure just because of some readers’ opinions. It’s really great — it has enough ups and downs and plot twists, and I love it so much.

But PLZ, please add a bit more of the protagonist actually taking the lead, whether he’s the bottom or the top, PLZ!

Please forgive me for freaking out like a lunatic in the comments on your page, it’s just that I’m really, really in so much pain right now.

Your reply wasn’t  rude — he was insulting your work. If it were me, I’d be even angrier.
But honestly, I’m also really struggling with this direction, because right now I can’t see any hope of a good ending. It’s kind of unimaginable for me… I’m someone who gets very emotionally invested, and at this point I’m just drowning in pain…
I was even planning how to add the shark, Ronaway, and the polar bear into my harem, but in reality there isn’t a single person in my harem. That really hurts.
Still, I think he’s the one who was impolite — your tone was justified, because he was making insulting comments about your work. If he doesn’t like it, he could just walk away, but attacking your work like that is not okay. I believe you definitely have a complete internal logic and an unexpected ending planned (even though I’m still really suffering right now QAQ).

What really makes this so painful for me is that the protagonist is written way too mediocre — so ordinary that there’s nothing outstanding about him at all, and he’s even overly kind… I can’t even see any chance of a good ending later on. It honestly hurts so much, especially for someone like me who gets immersed so easily. He clearly has such powerful abilities, but doesn’t know how to use them and has no say in anything. For all I know, that so-called divine artifact might even be tricking him… Please, give me a dark route where he turns evil and takes over the world, PLZ.

This is so painful— the story is amazing, but it hurts too much! Thank goodness I left a romance behind in Berno, or I’d really end up all alone, sob sob…

Plz, give me an ending where I’m in control and ruling the world. I promise I’ll train these two bad dogs into good doggies. (When I was literally leading the two of them around on leashes in the bar, I was so excited.)