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Oh my god, THIS WAS AWESOME! The writing, the characters, the plot—EVERYTHING is perfect. I felt so damn angry when I realized this visual novel is part of a series, and now... I feel empty.

But overall, you did a GREAT, GREAT job! I’m waiting so desperately for the next one—I need to know more! <3 This is definitely going on my list of favorite visual novels.

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That said, there were a few aspects that felt a little "weird," like the fast-paced romance between us and Lyall. I mean, given his personality, it makes sense why we fell in love, but it still felt rushed.

Also, I’m so invested in Adrius. There’s just something about him—how he was as a child versus now—that feels... off, in an intriguing way.

That’s all! Keep up the amazing work!!!!

Just finished until the last update, I swear this is going better and better althought... No hate but I hope the writter... burn in hell. It's too fucking everything and the plottwist, the gut wrenching moments. Perfection! <3

Finished reading it and I must say that it's really really GOOD!!! <3 <3
Now I have some questions:

• Are we gonna be able to know more about the crystals? In all the fantasy stories that I like to read, I'm well invested in how the world behave magic wise.
• This is personal thinking. I understand why Agnarr cannot use daggers, I mean, duh but bow? isn't it possible to use those big muscles to use a large bow? I mean, imagine how fast an arrow would be if the bow is able to handle that. Hehe

I wonder what are you gonna give us in the next chapter.

<3 Smooches <3

OK, don't worry. I will play it on the big screen for that beautiful boy 😉

Hello, I don't know if it's a normal problem but, in android device , the touch pad doesn't work. 

Yes, now we can. And it's understable

Ok, is not only me. Nice