Oh my god, THIS WAS AWESOME! The writing, the characters, the plot—EVERYTHING is perfect. I felt so damn angry when I realized this visual novel is part of a series, and now... I feel empty.
But overall, you did a GREAT, GREAT job! I’m waiting so desperately for the next one—I need to know more! <3 This is definitely going on my list of favorite visual novels.
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That said, there were a few aspects that felt a little "weird," like the fast-paced romance between us and Lyall. I mean, given his personality, it makes sense why we fell in love, but it still felt rushed.
Also, I’m so invested in Adrius. There’s just something about him—how he was as a child versus now—that feels... off, in an intriguing way.
That’s all! Keep up the amazing work!!!!