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1/2. It's definitely a good set up for the story! Though to be fair when the professor was cutting off, I expected it to be a case of bad internet, not a case of falling asleep lol. Not sure how to fix that, or if it would be better to just jump straight into the weird zoom part of it instead of prolonging the intro, depends really on what you're planning to do but sadly I can't tell you much since I'm not sure what you're planning to do ; v ;

3. The sounds and music definitely add to the story, I feel like they fit well, especially that drawn out creepy sound towards the end. 

4. I'd love it if the art actually had a little more contrast to it, something to make it feel less like a doodle and more polished if that makes sense. Just have there be Really Dark Shadows to emphasize some of the creepiness more? 

5. Not sure at the moment I'm afraid, there isn't much for me to think of other than something might go bad with the mom phone call or the subsequent zoom calls, but thats mostly just because I know what the general premise of the game is about. Otherwise, if you were to give this to me without any context, I probably wouldn't be able to figure out much :(

1. Also didn't expect the fall but it was really cool! I actually played through it twice bc I was a good boy who didn't enter the "do not enter" room thinking it wasn't finished at first before I realized Wait The Question Asks About Two Rooms so I went in there the second time around lol. 

2. I found it particularly cool that some of the "conversations" in the beginning felt like they were actively referring to what I was doing, since I was reading the white text and then the orange text (roughly translated from what I remember) was like Hey Stop It Im Trying To Talk 2 You. Felt really cool, would definitely like to see more of it :0 Not sure if this would be too out of scope, but it would also be interesting to have "secret passages" where you totally ignore what the orange text is saying to find some other path to try and avoid the orange text.

3. It's very straightforward, I had no issues navigating the space! 

- I definitely don't think it's rushed! I love the pacing of it (though im sad I couldnt just Leave The Party since that isnt finished yet because my introverted ass chose that as my first option lol) and the introduction is definitely clear and charming too. 

- I do love the interaction you do have so far though! It helps to set the world and to show how out of place Nick is at the party and in general with his own tone of voice when speaking compared to the girl he talks to. Definitely looking forward to more possible interactions like that! 

- I really don't have much I can criticize to be honest I genuinely love it so far and can't wait to see where it heads from here!