- I definitely don't think it's rushed! I love the pacing of it (though im sad I couldnt just Leave The Party since that isnt finished yet because my introverted ass chose that as my first option lol) and the introduction is definitely clear and charming too.
- I do love the interaction you do have so far though! It helps to set the world and to show how out of place Nick is at the party and in general with his own tone of voice when speaking compared to the girl he talks to. Definitely looking forward to more possible interactions like that!
- I really don't have much I can criticize to be honest I genuinely love it so far and can't wait to see where it heads from here!