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Those animations are really nice! A really cool aesthetic overall, very fun to look at and decipher.

Oooh that hurts bad. Loved seeing the re contextualization of pain as "pleasure", all the things that hurt and always hurt becoming a blessing because of who is inflicting them on you. Great story to feel like shit to, wonderful work.

Excellent art! Although my favorite parts were when Elf was drawn terribly, I'm a sucker for that kind of visual gag >u<

Damn, some pretty rotten feelings brought up by this one. Very well done!

Surprisingly cute considering the subject matter!

Very heartbreaking as is, I look forward to the completed story! I wonder, are the amateurish crop jobs on the characters deliberate or a product of rushed development? I think it's charming, but I think it could be more charming if pushed in a different direction.

Ooooh that was good, that was very good! The bird metaphors and the ending texts mirroring the opening, very well done. Great aesthetic too, it really stuck out from everything else.

Big fan of weird girls out weirding each other so this was fun for me. Very well done visuals, the little touches of the characters bouncing up and down and shaking is always fun. I like how both Niki and Amie dress and carry themselves so differently from their true natures, love me some parallels. I couldn't seem to get more than the one ending though and I'm not sure what I'm missing to trigger the other ones. Overall a cute game (despite all the killing)!

Quite the feel bad read! As the story progressed I hoped to see some hint of what Jona saw in Maud, or what she was like before (was there a before?) things got this bad. And it never comes! She's so stuck in her head and intrusive thoughts that they've become true! Truly tragic, left me feeling like shit, excellent work.

I love the rhythm/ pace of the reveals here, each part of the story re contextualizing everything before is very well done!

I love a good trip down to rock bottom! It's very nice to see how much both of them suffer from their arrangement, like, girls neither of you are really having fun with this are you?

The windows one

A very fun story! I got two of the (i assume) three endings. The part with the pepper damn near killed me.

That was really fucked up! I can't really say I liked it but it made me feel some nebulously awful emotions so good job! Just a heads up, after I reached the end I tried to see the extras  and ??? but the game crashed, and now opening it again it crashes on the content warning screen.

I like Sasha, she's a spiteful bitch but she keeps it real! I tried a bunch of combos to see if I could keep Mira alive, but was not successful. I'm assuming it's not possible? There's a nice little meta-narrative ( I think that's the word I want to use?) there with both player and character desperately trying to "win" when despite all their efforts it's ultimately futile. Cool game, definitely some stuff to chew on here.

I like the art in this, it's really solid! The ornate text box is pretty and all, but it covers up the art in some spots in a way that doesn't seem intentional. Overall a nice story that was surprisingly wholesome considering the theming of it all.

Hoh boy, that was intense! I'm confused as to how Hina- uh- managed to do that, but I like that it's not spelled out at all. It feeds in so well into the overall disorientating nature of the story. Something I like a lot about the art is how the majority of pictures are either extreme closeups, or un-centered and farther away, it mirrors the writing in how intimately we are in Hina's mind and body, yet how dissociated she is from everything around her. Except for Blue of course >:3 This was fucked up and hot and I like it lots!

Ooh, robot impact play, fun! Can't wait to see how having the shit beat out of her comes back to bite B! also, lol waluigi mcdonalds

AAAAAAAAAA I LOVE THE ART SO MUCH!! The story's such a good encapsulation of the bottom rung of american retail/service work and how it wears you down. I worked third shift for a few years back in the day, and the anxiety of a problem customer that only YOU can deal with is so fucking real, god damn. Very excited to see the next two acts, I can't wait to see how wrong all of this goes!

I love the characterization of a vampire who considers herself as the lesser of two evils. Like yeah, there are worse things that could happen  to you than getting your arm ripped open and your blood sucked, but that doesn't mean she's doing anyone a favor! I think it's funny how ember keeps getting drugged when it's so unnecessary. Mill and that other girl could have just told it to do whatever while sober and it wouldn't have changed anything. The sad reality of the sub that won't let itself say no. TWISTED STUFF! I likes it! Ooh also, I really like now the display names keep changing at the beginning before anyone is properly named. Very cute/ funny.

I absolutely adore the aesthetic of the dolls and the craft supplies, just seeing your progress  pics in the discord had me excited to read this one. 

You did a good job obfuscating the true nature of the angel. Ultimately my first assumption was right but you worked a lot of doubt into it as the story progressed!

Cece's ambiguity is fascinating, why does she care about keeping the angels alive if they're basically pests? Why does she care enough about humans to keep them around and heal them, but not enough to do it properly? I want to know more about her but I'm glad I don't. The story is overall stronger for keeping her inner workings a mystery.

I don't know if you plan to revisit this work at all, but if you're considering it I would encourage you to! I think with a bit more polish you could take this great VN and make it even greater!

I adore the art style so much! Very much looking forward to the full story.

I read this a week or two ago and it's stuck with me 'cuz of how much it fucking sucks! I mean that in the best way possible of course! It struck me how little Maddy seems to enjoy what she does, raping and kidnapping milfs with the same dull boredom one has while washing dishes. Just the least enthusiastic sadist I've ever read it's fucking pathetic. Errmmm the way you ran away when I tried to rape you made me feel kinda bad so I'm gonna kill you now lol :<. TWISTED. SAD. UTTERLY PATHETIC AND I DON'T FEEL BAD FOR HER! It's called "Banality" and holy shit that is EXACTLY what it is!

So many intense, heartbreaking moments! I was close to tears when her wings fell off, and was elated when even the regrown misshapen ones could still be used. And I ADORE the UI decoration and how it mimics the fairy's mental state, very clever storytelling technique! I really felt her rant at the beginning about wanting to not have to deal with humans. Really hit on the marginalized person experience well with that one.

Really was not expecting to sob so hard at this. Excellently done vn.