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I absolutely adore the aesthetic of the dolls and the craft supplies, just seeing your progress  pics in the discord had me excited to read this one. 

You did a good job obfuscating the true nature of the angel. Ultimately my first assumption was right but you worked a lot of doubt into it as the story progressed!

Cece's ambiguity is fascinating, why does she care about keeping the angels alive if they're basically pests? Why does she care enough about humans to keep them around and heal them, but not enough to do it properly? I want to know more about her but I'm glad I don't. The story is overall stronger for keeping her inner workings a mystery.

I don't know if you plan to revisit this work at all, but if you're considering it I would encourage you to! I think with a bit more polish you could take this great VN and make it even greater!

Cece’s ambiguity is important to me. My first reader for this story went “omggg Cece is so evil” and my second reader went “Cece is such a weird little sweetheart”. Yes…. YES…. My writing… it’s working…. 

oh and I totally want to fix up the coding, repair the crash at the end, and add all the sprites I didn’t have time to add. Also somehow the whole sound effects channel is just gone in the “final” game, even though Sara made them and I *tried* to code them in! Plus adding the actual credits back in… there’s lots I want to do! I’m going to wait until judging is done of course, I don’t want to mess up my entry :P