I am sorry but I am confused
the original FZ light novel 4 volumes do not have servant profiles history only their stats and NPs
and the one you used for the fanmade VN are identicle to the FGO fan translation profiles of this characters 1 to 1 not a single difference
if? you aren't planning to make an update?
well if you ever do ill be happy to write the profiles myself
excuse me but may I suggest some improvements to the history sections?
I noticed your using their FGO ingame profile but that is too short
you should have looked at their FGO MATERIAL profile as well
they are more detailed and include new facts that fit more with the way the original FSN did it
for example diarmuid's includes that his story is treated as an inspiration for lancelot's and includes the fact he had 2 swords as well
you should also use the official translation rather than the fan translation its translated and worded much better
you should also look at their other version
diarmuid saber version also goes in details about his past that aren't mentioned in his lancer version profile
for example it starts with "A powerful knight and man of unparalleled beauty who wields two demonic swords and demonic spears. He was raised by Aengus, the fairy king and god of love, and Manannán, the god of the sea. Diarmuid was a member of Fionn mac Cumhaill's Knights of Fianna, and is said to have performed great feats when the knightly order fought alongside the fairy king Abarthach."
this is a much better start than his lancer self profile and is STILL relevent to his lancer self
I would be glad to even combine the profiles into 1 coherent one myself and send it to you if you wish
the history section is my favorite part of the original VN so this is something I wanna be done right
