thank you for your writing. it hurts in the kokoro!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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everyone you interact with morphs you in some shape or form. not them exactly, but your response. splitting you into hallways and doors and all, and what's a god? you control every single one of your own actions so are you your own god? i'm sleep deprived. i don't know what i'm saying but i wish i could have made different choices.
in the poem and otherwise. what am i saying LMFDSAOFJEWOAJF
thank u for ur writing again (6th time)!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i'm absolutely shocked that there are no comments actually. i was poking around itchio but this was so amazing that i had to say something, anything.
i don't think i have the words but i love this so so much. holy. please never stop writing.
if nurbrun has a million fans, then i am one of them. if nurbrun has ten fans, then i am one of them. if nurbrun has only one fan then that is me. if nurbrun has no fans, then that means i am no longer on earth. if the world is against nurbrun, then i am against the world.
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!This game's really beautiful and the music's really nice!!! I love the idea of soulmates not actually being soulmates, and the little dashes of humor within the game are great! That said, I have a few ideas on how to improve the story, and I hope that you don't take offense to these suggestions.
1. I definitely agree with another comment that the endless task assigning gets repetitive... And also, is there a purpose meant for the money that Kira earns by working?
2. I feel like sometimes the romantic plot is really inconsistent; I know that there's ultimately an "endgame" route with Robin but it feels really... rough, if that makes sense. I haven't played his route but I assume that everything would flow better if you just kept hanging out with him. However, if you don't, you get thrown into a weird mix of canon + chosen romance. Maybe work making the routes all canon in different ways (more work) or maybe more of a kinetic novel?