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Something about the early moments of the game just ruined the whole experience for me.  It took me what felt like forever to find the early maze.  And from there the game did pick up, and had all that I expect from indie horror.  But it was too late, I had already lost interest and couldn't regain it.  I feel like I made a good bit of progress, but I really don't know how far I made it in the game before I had to put it away.  I do appreciate all the work in this game however, and the urge to put so much story in it.  But there should also be a fine line between how much you read and how much you play.  Too much reading can ruin the experience as well.

This is the 5th game in the video

 
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Thank you very much for playing my game and for the feedback.

True, the game at the beginning is very slow. And as you say, there is too much reading, I wanted to detail the story so much that I didn't realize how many pages to read, which slows the game down. But then grab the rhythm and horror.

You were close to reaching the final part. Today I updated the game, made some improvements and added checkpoints, since that was necessary, because I know it is frustrating to die and have to play it all over again.

Thanks again for playing.