I really like the visual style. It's atmospheric and engrossing. That being said, things like putting the text more on a sheet of paper would be more involved to me, just scattered across the screen pulls me away a bit. I don't quite understand the ending, I felt like something should have happened to finalize it, whether it be a story, a different action, or even just a loud jumpscare sound. But this environment alone screams horror, and could really be put to good use with some more horror moments, or even some kind of creature/person/anything chasing you. Food for thought.
This is the 4th game in the video