Pros:
- art is really good!
- animations are nice and smooth
- the music and sounds are very fitting
- not too hard puzzle-wise (there were no puzzles that would stop the gameplay for too long)
Cons:
- story (it wasn't bad, don't get me wrong. Maybe it's more to do with the length of the game, but I feel the game would be much better if the story had the time and place to grow. I did not feel for the character, we were thrown right into action, but given the length of the game... it is what it is I guess)
Overall:
This is a short horror experience, much better than a lot of those here on the website in a sense that it is more polished, more mature. The hole in the wall reminded me of "Silent Hill 4", the skelly-archivist reminded me of "Planescape Torment". I have a feeling that maybe... (maybe?) you played "If On A Winter Night Four Travellers", I find it a bit similiar. Not to take away from the originality of your game of course.
I follow your work because your art is very good and also I enjoy horror stories. Hope to play more from you soon :)