At first I had a hard time grasping whatever the game was trying to tell me because it kinda goes too fast without telling much, but, after a couple of playtrough's I got the hang of it and it got really fun, nice spin on a classic ghost and a lot of creative gameplay choices.
What I liked:
-A bunch of great characters.
-High Replayability
-Amazing art and great art direction.
-Great heartfelt story that is also spooky but with no cheap screamers
-Bonus room
What I think could be improved:
-Better development of the main character, is hard to care a lot for someone we barely know (Although I guess the focus in the game is on the other children so it makes sense) and some tutorial at the beginning, maybe just controls.
-Be mindful of using a lot of visual effects in one room, I understand the point is to block visibility but it gets a little hard to see (I am also really blind so it may just be me)
-Some parts get repetitive after a few playtroughs it would be nice to save when needed or add more save points, specially id the game is supposed to be played many times.
-A little too much pixel hunting (Seeing what you can interact or not clicking on everything).
Overall a great game, specially for a first time, I personally really enjoy RPGmaker games and have played plenty of them, and this is one of the good ones, whatever you decided to do in the future I wish you big success and I would definitely love to try another game, RPGmaker or not.
Keep up the good work!