This is a fun game, but the new layout is really confusing. It felt like steps were left out; when I downloaded the old one, the instructions are a lot more clear.
The new one almost feels like pages 2 and 5 are describing completely different modes of play. It doesn't really mention referring to the tables to guide your story, so reading it front to back in order to understand how to play is simply confusing.
Also the Relationships table on page 6 has a transparent background which makes it difficult to read. The game itself is fun once you actually figure out the gameplay though.
Edit: Could you speak to why you removed the 2-player rules in the new edition? Seems like something that should be included since you already put the work in.