I'll give my honest opinion NGL the art style if good💪 But for me its just boring well it is a novel yes I honestly say that the novel was good but boring cuz there are no choices to choose well I have played something similar like this but there are choices then the animation comes pretty good 3/5 its just that the things around the GIRL also moves kinda annoying to see that
You're right, I have to insert more choices but remember that this is a kinetic novel with no narrative branches at all. It's my first game and it's hard to start with a more complex choice based narrative. About animations it's true, sadly I learned after some animations how to freeze the rest of the scene to move only what I want (you can see yourself that some animations are on point), in next updates I rework some of the old animations for this reason. Thanks for your honest opinion!