Notes while playing, will be updating as soon as get some questions/suggestions or they get answered:
1) ig there's supposed to be a door in Alice's kitchen since her portrait is darkened but there's no door...
2) The very second hypnosis with Alice (where he tries to reach her boobs and gets on the edge of her awakening from trance) looks a bit too experienced. How he describes how to relax is not something you come up with your first time, but thats just my personal thoughts.
3) Change red filter to orange or yellow for showing evening, red is a bit tense for it.
4) A bit too harsh how he enters the house and already giving commands.
5) Better make "X" button on the screen of PC or make it just "go back" button as anything else in the game. That would make easier to play with mouse only. And also will make it easier for future mobile releases i think.
6) The cat at the temple should be stopped, but it turns to you like NPC. I know why just letting you know it.
p.s.: as such as Bea too (when she "unnoticed you yet")
7) "Load" function would be good.
8) It hard to separate whos talking atm. Different colors or fonts for names should do i'd say, but ofc up to you to add them or not.
9) Why NPC's hopping? Trader women in town and Audrey when you're first getting to the facility with her especially creeps out...
10) Bea's sprite is somewhat blonde while she is brown haired.
p.s.: Audrey's too tho, more like yellow rather than red.
11) Having two "Controlling Liz(II)" quests, one to research and one to apply...
12) Wouldn't be wiser to hide the "New day, new job" quest while it is uncompleted?
13) Also with "Repairing gadgets(II)" since device isn't implemented yet...
14) Can repeatedly research "Controlling Bea(I)" on the PC, which is a bug.
15) Bea's self-interuptions are too fast and unnecessary. There is A LOT of text and i dont think most of the people would be able to read half of it at least...
16) Skip is unforgivably necessary since you've decided to make us rewatch the same dialogues for THAT many times with no difference, just to see anything new... At least make text spead setting so we can skip dialogues effectively ╥﹏╥
17) Also Pendulum speeds things up too quickly, i mean, why all of a sudden i can have saight strex if i didnt complete the hypnosis just now using a stone instead of telepathy?
18) Why MC asking questions about bed in the library if he obviouzly knows Liz lives her?
Will investigate further into the game nowᕦ( ᐛ )ᕡ
p.s.: Usually i would go to discord or somewhere to not get in to the comments under the game, but since you dont have it ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°), welp, here it is.