I really like your storytelling in this piece - starting heavy and dark moving into lonely and somber, then marching back into the dark mechanical forward progress. While listening I imagine the story of a human who is conflicted about his relationship with his computer as he recognizes it is becoming more humanistic, fitting the theme very well. The march-like ending feels like something maybe isn’t quite as intended and the artificial intelligence has a new goal of dominance. Great work and thank you for sharing!