This was an enjoyable read, I love the attention to detail like during the dream right before you wake up you can see Cadgan's eyes are red, Cadgan's eyes are not red. I know it will be told with time but if it were me i would interrogate Ranzkai for every way a deal with him could possibly impact me negatively and positively, like I want a written contract and the ability to ask for clarification on parts that seem vague.