looks good and sounds great, but in my experience nobody is going to read the itch page. it really needs an in game tutorial.
also, when i tried the story demo for the first time i got this error
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ERROR in
action number 1
of Step Event0
for object obj_dicesys:
DoAdd :1: undefined value
at gml_Script_Do@anon@20336@NodeHazardHP1_SceneTravel
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gml_Script_Do@anon@20336@NodeHazardHP1_SceneTravel (line -1)
gml_Script_anon@14884@SceneTravel_SceneTravel
gml_Script_OnModeTrigger@anon@3888@Scene_Scene
gml_Object_obj_dicesys_Step_0
then after i opened it again it worked normally.