It looks a lot better now! I could go on to nitpick, but you're in a lot better shape than when I first saw it. I would just make sure people know Rose of Segunda is your other game, because at first I thought that you were giving the game for 6 pounds. Make sure you mention it's the prequel and not the game the Kickstarter is for. I foresee a lot of people grabbing that 6 pound tier thinking it's for the game the Kickstarter is for.
I urge you to not do an early bird special for the game tier, but to do it for a higher tier. People are going to buy the game tier anyway, and you're losing whatever discount you give. Having the early bird on a higher tier gets the people who were only going to buy the game tier to contribute more, and you really need it.
It is INCREDIBLY hard to get a Kickstarter funded. I've said this, but you can't imagine how hard until you launch and hear the crickets chirp after day 3 of your launch. Just being on Kickstarter is not enough to get you funded. You have to hustle like crazy. I'm Ms. Successful Game Kickstarters, and I've had 50% of my campaigns FAIL.