Please don’t worry about your tone – I am not looking to take offence from anyone kind enough to leave feedback
I’ve increased the price of the game and tiers based on the advice of several people - I don’t think my studio is in a position yet where I can expect a wage from the proceedings (cost of living is high where I am from so…), but that is okay for the time being. Once my studio is larger, this is something that I can look at again.
Good idea regarding adding a limit on revisions – it’s rare for me to ask for them, so they slipped my mind.
Thank you for the general feedback, too.
For Charlotte, it is supposed to indicate that though she is worrying for her whole family, she is worrying mostly about her younger brother (because he is acting aloof and seems super excited by the prospect of a war). I’ll run it by my proofreaders and see if it needs to be clarified.
Enrol is British English which is what I use
Guil Again, I’ll run it by my proofreaders
Mathys – It’s supposed to be the first one, but I’ll run it by my proofreaders (lol, they are going to be busy, it seems)
Many thanks again for your feedback and all the best