Overall an ambitious project with some good scenes & imagary. I am glad you have decided to design your own assets as this is what will make you stand out from the rest of the crowd. Sci-fi setting inspired by blade runner & memoirs of a geisha makes for a good concept it seems.
The atmosphere was good especially leading up to the end, the corridoor section was very tense all the way up until the end where unfortunately the Geisha creature sound effect let it all down. As this is still in development I would suggest a more scary tone is used to portray the creature at the end, overall though great job & I look forward to the next update.
Aaron