Hello! Thanks for your feedback.
Concerning Laura revealing the player's kink to Ashley, I'll probably move that section, and communicate with the player about it. You're right, it breaks trust.
The "too late" and "calm down horny boy" are supposed to seem playful, but I understand that they may feel interpreted differently. I will probably change the first, but may try to make "calm down" feel more obvious.
You're right about the "I'm not sure", I'll probably remove it.
It's a bit hard to convey a personality for the MC while keeping them neutral enough. My goal for him is to be secure, but loving the thrill of sharing, which is how I consider netorase relationship should be to feel healthy. I also want Laura not to do it only for him (which wouldn't be healthy), but I should probably explicit that a bit more.
I hope future versions will be more to your taste. =)