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Im not sure
- GF reveals his kink (trust-breaking and makes him feel humiliated)
- When she says: too late to get cold feet. (it kind of defeat the consensual agreement)
- Always "calm down horndog" (it feels demeaning)
- Im not sure (helps nothing, it will not stop anything, just create angst)
not sure what the Mc is, a desperate cuck or insecure. do he know what he is doing? he feel weak and the next time just horny and want more, to be insecure again.
she plays the role of someone that is doing it for him, she has a position of power over him but in the same time plays uncertainty.
the emoji is not helping as Im not sure what they mean. will they impact or not?
for me, when I get that netorare-feeling it means I didn't enjoy it. and thats the case here.
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Hello! Thanks for your feedback.
Concerning Laura revealing the player's kink to Ashley, I'll probably move that section, and communicate with the player about it. You're right, it breaks trust.
The "too late" and "calm down horny boy" are supposed to seem playful, but I understand that they may feel interpreted differently. I will probably change the first, but may try to make "calm down" feel more obvious.
You're right about the "I'm not sure", I'll probably remove it.
It's a bit hard to convey a personality for the MC while keeping them neutral enough. My goal for him is to be secure, but loving the thrill of sharing, which is how I consider netorase relationship should be to feel healthy. I also want Laura not to do it only for him (which wouldn't be healthy), but I should probably explicit that a bit more.
I hope future versions will be more to your taste. =)