* spoilers *
Im not sure
- GF reveals his kink (trust-breaking and makes him feel humiliated)
- When she says: too late to get cold feet. (it kind of defeat the consensual agreement)
- Always "calm down horndog" (it feels demeaning)
- Im not sure (helps nothing, it will not stop anything, just create angst)
not sure what the Mc is, a desperate cuck or insecure. do he know what he is doing? he feel weak and the next time just horny and want more, to be insecure again.
she plays the role of someone that is doing it for him, she has a position of power over him but in the same time plays uncertainty.
the emoji is not helping as Im not sure what they mean. will they impact or not?
for me, when I get that netorare-feeling it means I didn't enjoy it. and thats the case here.
Viewing post in Netorase Phone first release comments
Hello! Thanks for your feedback.
Concerning Laura revealing the player's kink to Ashley, I'll probably move that section, and communicate with the player about it. You're right, it breaks trust.
The "too late" and "calm down horny boy" are supposed to seem playful, but I understand that they may feel interpreted differently. I will probably change the first, but may try to make "calm down" feel more obvious.
You're right about the "I'm not sure", I'll probably remove it.
It's a bit hard to convey a personality for the MC while keeping them neutral enough. My goal for him is to be secure, but loving the thrill of sharing, which is how I consider netorase relationship should be to feel healthy. I also want Laura not to do it only for him (which wouldn't be healthy), but I should probably explicit that a bit more.
I hope future versions will be more to your taste. =)
Maybe to late to add comments but I just started the game. I disagree with OP.
For me the purpose of playing the a ntr chat game is to be cuckolded by girlfriend while I am not present. In this way it is pushing boundaries.
If we just agreed with everything up front and had no pushing boundaries we would just be swingers and not ntr.
So with that mind set I like the fact that girlfriend reveals kink and I really like that she does not reveal it to humiliate him like so much fiction. Instead she has doubts and does what anyone would do if they needed advice. Ask someone they trust. The fact that this is embarrassing to him without being done in malice makes it a wonderful erotic twist.
Also I enjoy the submissive nature of cuckolding so I do not like when the submissive cuckold bottoms from he top. I played another game where the only way to forward the cuckold story line was to encourage girlfriend to be a slut and beg for every naughty action. It feels much more erotic when you have revealed the kink to your girlfriend and you both are stumbling through the initial steps and need to encourage each other. It is natural to have doubts and if you send tell your girlfriend that you are turned on by her having sex with another man and then the moment she is about to have sex you express doubts it IS probably too late to get cold feet.
I did not see the calm down horndog as demeaning but trying to be playful but my issue was it seemed like that particular phase was used so much I stopped using the horny emoji just so I would stop seeing it.
The angst is the best part of ntr cuckolding. I wish there were more angst response.
Im not sure
- GF reveals his kink (trust-breaking and makes him feel humiliated)
- When she says: too late to get cold feet. (it kind of defeat the consensual agreement)
- Always "calm down horndog" (it feels demeaning)
- Im not sure (helps nothing, it will not stop anything, just create angst)
not sure what the Mc is, a desperate cuck or insecure. do he know what he is doing? he feel weak and the next time just horny and want more, to be insecure again.
she plays the role of someone that is doing it for him, she has a position of power over him but in the same time plays uncertainty.
the emoji is not helping as Im not sure what they mean. will they impact or not?
for me, when I get that netorare-feeling it means I didn't enjoy it. and thats the case here.