Very nice art and cool little puzzles. I really liked that you brought in some other gameplay with the ghost. I really liked the beginning of the story, but at the end I did not get it anymore. Maybe you need to work on this a bit. Other things you might improve in the future:
- The exclamations marks do often not show again. Sometimes I saw one and then it disappeared if I run over it. Then I had to walk quite a bit away and come back to trigger it again.
- The text was sometimes not readable because it was aligned too high on the paper and sometimes too wide.
Besides that I had quite some fun playing this. Well done.