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I'm just trying to help improve the textual media by pointing out places where it is obviously wrong.
the story and concept are great, i just want the visual novel to be a success but it can't be that with these basic mistakes left in.

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This is a very minor and insignificant issue. With all due respect, I feel like you are the only one worrying about it.