I see some promise with the opening minute and the final act. It's just that the middle of the game needs something to really tie it all together. Definitely not a bad attempt by any means and there is some good to be found here.
I also experienced some bugs in the game. I found a lack of collision in a few areas and some events triggered at the wrong time (upon a game relaunch after I recorded I saw that I got a scene way too early).