I don't know who you are. I found this game while looking through newest games and listening to Bug Hunter. I love your art. The game not as much. It reminded me of Infinity Train and Adventure Time. I feel like that is what you were going for. As an introduction to the characters I don't feel like it told me anything about them. They did not make any choices. They were just went with the flow. That is fine, but I don't care about either of the girls. Anyone could have gone on this adventure and got the same outcome. Why do I want to see them go on another adventure? What can they do no one else can? The setting was fine and the story was fine. I would give the game a solid 5/10. It was in no way bad, but I am not going to remember it in a week.
In part two I would make the characters take a stand for something. Anything will do.