I thought this was a very strong and well-polished piece, both in terms of writing and art. The characters were well defined and fleshed out, and the worldbuilding was easy to comprehend if a bit much to digest at times. The beginning was a bit heavy on backstory and slow to get going, though. I could see this being made into something like an anime!
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This made my morning! I've always like viewing my projects as anime in VN format!
I can understand why you thought the beginning was a tad slow. Maybe there were a few bits that I could've left up to the reader's imagination. Or maybe the walk between Caius and Griswyr more succinct. It's hard to give chars screen time in jam projects while also keeping a good pace.
Thanks for playing, glad you enjoyed it!