This was so much fun. I didn't even realize it was your first game until scrolling down to the comments and seeing that other comment. This was great! The controls and environment were awesome.
I love how the storytelling was a side thing, nothing shoved in your face. You could have totally ignored it if you wanted. I read every line though.
In the end I got all the carrots and died 51 times. Even though I died a ton, it never felt unfair. I only had myself to blame. I would love to see where you go with the rest of this game.