PtK has fast become a feel good VN for me~ π it's mushy in all the right ways and just serious enough for it not to be clawingly sweet π I'm a pretty big fan of NSFW, but I 100% stand behind the choice to keep this project clean π
I think it was a real clever artistic decision to add piercings to Artemis's beanie (as he doesn't have ears) to make him look more punk rock π
Might I make a suggestion concerning the scene where the power goes out? I think Hunter's response to Arti's aggressive approach was a little tame. He doesn't have to go full on jock, but I think Hunter being more assertive would not just feel more natural (unless he doesn't do well with conflict), but it would also help to make the situation feel a little more tense. Just a suggestion of course.
Omg, Ollie is too damn adorable for his own good! π³ And that's saying a lot, because Rofi is dogdamn adorable~ βΊοΈ really liked his reaction to being asked about dating Artemis.
Fun update, I love what xou're doing π