LET ME ALSO ADD SINCE I WAS SO EXCITED EARLIER I COULDN'T STOP AND FORGOT TO INCLUDE THIS:
THE WRITING ITSELF, HOLY SHIT.
"You're like a madness, something I could succumb to."
(yes this implies in this short time I've already started on a different character, BECAUSE IT'S SO GOOD)
Oh my fucking god. Three cheers for VERY impressive writing! When I spoke of how I loved the storyline I should've mentioned the writing that made it up, good god. Wonderfully composed, and christ, not one mistake or one misspelling even to come across. Three cheers for wonderful writing, incredible choice of words, perfect grammar, and good spelling (that can be so neglected in stories, but also so noticed...). You wonderful humans keep on keepin' on.