i love that his name is Little Guy!! in general, the characters are very fun -- the way they talk and their names (Captain Mothball). i think illustrations would add a lot (i'm also just curious to see what Little Guy looks like). also, i think some of the battle-y sequences could use more choice/interaction? i didn't run into any issues playing the game the glowing text is really cool -- it adds to & fits with the ghost aspect (it also just makes it easier to read). the text-styling in the game adds a lot, and it helps visually in longer passages :)