it's a very simple game with a grate presentation, I liked to questions that it makes to the player, but I not like longs intros. However, the general experience with music and the idea of a new body felt a good addition to this simple game.
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Maybe it's about found the right public, I prefer games with goods mechanics than goods stories. Maybe the point of the game was other and the story result in a slop, but maybe you can cut it on small pices and spread them on the game, the matter it's to have a mental image of what you game should be, then choose the right features and put them on the right time for the right people.