Hey! I absolutely loved seeing your idea come to life in this game! First of all, I appreciate how wonderful the writing is. I believe that's the strongest component to your work. I also really like the game's more minimalistic aesthetic, all the illustrations are really well-done without taking away from the main component of the game. I agree that music / sound effects will strengthen the kind of mood you're looking for. I think if you were to expand upon the game in terms of writing, I would love to further understand the traditions and meanings behind Basant-- it seems like a really joyous festival! And, perhaps the "characters" of the game (the kite or the kid) wind up making their way to buildings or places that are memorable to you in Karachi. For example, maybe at some point the kite gets stuck onto a window pane of a restaurant you loved visiting as a kid and that would be a great moment to talk about traditional / popular food of the area!
Overall, very great work!!!!!