OMG!!! What an incredible game you've made in such a short amount of time!!! First of all-- huge kudos to the way you set the mood and aesthetic of your game so so quickly. Everything from the music to the charming illustrations to the general writing was very well though out in my opinion. I'm in awe of all the fun "puzzle" components of the game, from using the inventory to having to figure out the code. It seems like you made a really good use of everything Twine has to offer! Not only that, but I could tell you had a strong drive with the story of your game and its quirky characters that play on common film tropes. Really fun!
My one suggestion is that I felt like the text rectangle and scrolling function was a little less user-friendly than it could be. The rectangle was a little too slim maybe, or I'm also not used to visual novel games having a scroll function for the text. My recommendation is to play with the layout a bit more to see if there's something that feels more right.
Overall, fantastic job!!!!!!!!!!!