I don't normally like visual novels.
But this one was different than most and was enjoyable to read. it was a bit hard to read the font sometimes there would be small lines or visual bugs with the text that made it hard, but it was good.
The story/dialog was on point just like how @TheJayDuck said below. The story was a bit too long for me, I kinder zoned out after a while but that's just me I don't reading games. LOL
Other then that the art was nice the colours worked well and gave me a undertale style vibe it worked well great job!