I've noted the critic but sadly there isn't a lot i could do about it. You wouldn't want to remove the detective from a detective movie right? On the other hand, I'm rewritting a few scenes that I don't vibe with anymore, it will take some time too
Ngl that makes me really curious which scenes you're gonna be rewriting. Know that's probably private and not a just public thing, but gotta be honest makes me so curious
I'd love to redo the onsen, especially azul's scene. I don't know if i'll have it ready for the next update but it's been bothering me how off story it feels like and how melo seems to be acting differently than usual. I'm also changing Meli statis from brother to best friend.
