This was pretty fun to start, but I would have liked it WAY better if everything Murphy said was in the same deadpan that the inner monolouge voice used. Maybe it was part of the intended humor/tone, but by 2/3 through I hated the main character's voice so much I watched a YouTube video to see the ending so I could skip the dialogue.
The overall gmae tone was satirically serious, and then there's a goofy idiot saying "yo", "doods", and "LOL" that just kills the humor for me.